Saturday, December 5, 2009

Do u like this poem?

to my secret velintine



from your only sunshine



I should have love you more in time



but instead i drank summer wine gasping at the sunshine



i clambed a masculine pine



and from it i drink its posion turpentine



then i dreamed of you



you were mine and covered in vine



on top of are pine and we were



making love in the devine sunshine



what dose everyone thing how can i make it better is it in a poem form any idea's



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yes i love this poem.............it is sooooooooo romantic.



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This one is good too... Dont change a thing keep it up your doing good!!!!
your poem is great. really awesome
Good poem, man.



Keep doing what your doing.

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