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to my secret velintine

from your only sunshine

I should have love you more in time

but instead i drank summer wine gasping at the sunshine

i clambed a masculine pine

and from it i drink its posion turpentine

then i dreamed of you

you were mine and covered in vine

on top of are pine and we were

making love in the devine sunshine

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Good poem, man.

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