Unfishisned poem?

what dose everyone thing of this unfishisned poem

to my secret velintine

from your lovely susnshine

i know am not as smart as Einstine

but im still your sunshine

i should have love you more in time

but instead i drink summer wine gasping in the sunshine

i clambed the masculine pine and dreamed of my sweet sunshine and are secret velintine

your mine mine in the sweet rays of sunshine

your as sweet as turpentine from a masculine pine

i wish you were mine so we could make love in the sunshine

how do i edited it to a poem from and anyone would like to add on to all my mis sakes go head hit me

Unfishisned poem?met opera

More of a rhyme, not poetic enough.

Unfishisned poem?movie theatre opera theater

Nice poem! But i wish you wouldn't use the word sunshine as much... too much repetition may take away the essence and clarity of your poem... And spelling! ---valentine---Einstein--- And don't make it much of a rhyming poem, you can make it freeverse instead or a sonnet or something like that... it would definitely make your poem more meaningful and substancial...:)