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to my secret velintine

from your lovely susnshine

i know am not as smart as Einstine

but im still your sunshine

i should have love you more in time

but instead i drink summer wine gasping in the sunshine

i clambed the masculine pine and dreamed of my sweet sunshine and are secret velintine

your mine mine in the sweet rays of sunshine

your as sweet as turpentine from a masculine pine

i wish you were mine so we could make love in the sunshine

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I'm sorry, but you need to really think about what you are trying to say and stop being so concerned about forcing the rhyme...it needs a lot of work...

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nice try
Turpentine is not so much sweet, as it is a toxic poison.
spell check and try different rhyming words